After having positive feedback about the new writing style, I've gone ahead and re-written Episode 1 of Crux!
Here it is if anyone wants to recap. It's got a little more detail to it as well.
Thanks to everyone who responded :) I'm looking forward to going forward with new chapters soon!
Edit: Episode 2 updated as well!
Here
Edit 2: And Episode 3 is done and dusted too. So on with the chapter I'll go!
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